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Descriptive writing

2J read the book Hattie and the Fox by Mem Fox. They wrote descriptive sentences based on the text in the book.

 

And Hattie said,

"Goodness gracious me!

I can see a black rough nose, two pointy ears, two eyes, a long soft body, four strong legs, and a short fluffy tail in the green bushes! It's a fox! It's a fox!"

 

And Hattie said,

"Goodness gracious me!

I can see a black pointy nose, two sharp ears, two yellow sneaky eyes, a long soft skinny body, four long legs, and a huge long tail in the dark green bushes!

It's a fox! It's a fox!"